Starts with goodbye

by Italian Stallion   Nov 27, 2005


Starts with goodbye
some hearts have the stars on their side
some hearts just get lucky sometimes
so hard to see myself without you

guess I'm going to have to hurt
guess I'm going to cry
just don't want to let you go
life gets that much harder without you

when you look back on times we had
love was always there for us
all the good times we have been through
all my dreams lie within you

I want to be inside your heaven
I want to be the only one
your the one I can stay with
when I'm sad and want to cry

so take me to the place you cry from
cause I'll never stop loving you
I'll promise you love until forever
Love without end, amen

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  • 17 years ago

    by Chelsea

    This is Carrie Underwood Right???

  • 18 years ago

    by azlan26

    I actually LOVED this poem
    the line "so hard to see myself without you"
    It really hit me lol
    I don't know it was just full of emotion, and so full of desire
    I'm not so sure about the last line, but I can be picky, and again no real rhyme sceme - it doesn't make it bad but sometimes poems look neater when structured
    But seriously I am in love with this poem
    Keep writing =]

  • 18 years ago

    by Raychel

    I love it!!! u really DO have emotions!!! i owe a couple of people sum money...lmao...i jk...but i like it. it's how i feel sumtimes...

  • 18 years ago

    by Juls

    That is a wondeful poem hun. I wish to find that guy in my life one day in my lifetime...I hope I will!! Great use of emotion in it, it feels like you are saying it to my face. Like I said wonderful work and keep it up. I can tell you are going to go far with it someday.

    Love ya,
    xoxJulie

  • 18 years ago

    by Victoria

    Very very very good joe...really...idk...i can really relate....keep it up..your a FANTASTIC writer...take care!!

    your friend

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