Aww joe dats so cute n sweet lol. great work though..keep it up
mwaz tc
luv dia

My friend could relate to that. i gave it a 5. nice job

My friend could relate to that. i gave it a 5. nice job

AWWWW! that is an awesome and sweet poem keep up the awesome work and keep writing!

5/5

Very very very good joe...really...idk...i can really relate....keep it up..your a FANTASTIC writer...take care!!

your friend

That is a wondeful poem hun. I wish to find that guy in my life one day in my lifetime...I hope I will!! Great use of emotion in it, it feels like you are saying it to my face. Like I said wonderful work and keep it up. I can tell you are going to go far with it someday.

Love ya,
xoxJulie

I love it!!! u really DO have emotions!!! i owe a couple of people sum money...lmao...i jk...but i like it. it's how i feel sumtimes...

I actually LOVED this poem
the line "so hard to see myself without you"
It really hit me lol
I don't know it was just full of emotion, and so full of desire
I'm not so sure about the last line, but I can be picky, and again no real rhyme sceme - it doesn't make it bad but sometimes poems look neater when structured
But seriously I am in love with this poem
Keep writing =]

This is Carrie Underwood Right???