I love this one, Katelyn! You are so talented with all of your writing! Keep it up, gurlie! 5/5

I love how you started out comparing nature to your relationship then you totally twisted it with this revenge spirit. i know this is lame but i thought it was funny the things that you said..
All I want to do is smash your face with my fist,
But instead I would rather do much worse,
Do what you did to me, at first,
your saying your going to smash his face in then your like no i will do worse and then you start with that awsome revenge!
~ revenge although isn't always the answer.but its awfully funny. EmOtIoNaL pAiN is much much worse than physical pain.. remember that. i hope you work everything out in a resonable manner