Wow, tht is just really sad then it turns around to you deciding shes worth it all. Bianca is really lucky to have you. 5/5
becca x

Very interesting poem.

Thanks for all the comments guy i appreciate it!

Very nice!!! i got a bit lost at the beggining, but its got a great meaning. the style is a bit confusing, but the language is great!!!

the idea of the feeling of love stopping you from leaving is a very beautiful one

well done

Ruby

I will right more poems later this week or on the weekend, i have this really long one but i dont no if it good enuf i was riting it in class when i was bored goes on for ages! lol well i might post it if i get some more good comments lol thanks for everything you guys keep cheacking my poems more to come soon

Once agen i cant beilive i was such a big hit ppls lol

Wow! um... yea.... don't really kno wat to say! lol! was realy good... I loved it. argh! I kno... I love everyones poems but they just so dam good... keep it up...

This is a great poem!
Especially for your first one!
Ive reda people's latest poems and theyre not as good as this.
The only peice of advice I have for future poem is to make a certain flow and stick to it, Or to make it easyer put it in stanzas?
Well done all in all! Its cute! At the begining its so sad then the atmosphere chnages and your happy well getting there :D
Stay strong!

xx

Joshy what can i say love you tooo xxx
I think everyone has been in that place one time or the other.
I think its great, you sum it up
Keep it up luv B

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Joshy great poem! I really liked it. ill make sure to read your other poems when you write them.

Great work, I like the style (Its not in stanza form).
I have fights all the time that sums it up well.
Keep it up

Darkest Wishes
Matt

Great work, I like the style (Its not in stanza form).
I have fights all the time that sums it up well.
Keep it up

Darkest Wishes
Matt

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It is nice i like it joshy hony

Nice to see that you gave up something that can have a big hold on your life for the one you love. Bianca is really lucky to have you. I look forward to reading more of your poems.