Comments : One picture

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Hello :D
    This poem is really good so much emotion in it!
    I really loved these two lines "no other girl has had smile so unique,
    that makes me lose all words to speak,"
    its such a sweet thing!
    You two are really good together! you should start a new account only for the poems you share!
    This was really nice, and such a grteat idea.. It has mixed emotion because its happy that a picture makes you fel that way, but sad that a picture is all you have.. wow well doneI really liked this... its like a memories poem! lol well done xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Ruthie

    Awwww... mate I loved it. I could really c wat u were saying and I could so relate. I also loved the way u used the picture thing. made it feel more special somehow. I'm really lovin ur stuff!

  • 18 years ago

    by just a poet

    Wow, great poem, really caught the moment in those few lines, my favourite bit was the ending
    one picture of you is all I have to see,
    but every glimpse of it makes me happy,
    any way i thought it was really good and i'd defenitly give it a 5!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    Beautiful poem!!! you're both so talented. keep it up.
    -xXx-

  • 18 years ago

    by RadianceInReverse

    I agree with all of them...its a really special poem.....Love you Joclyn

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Hey...I commented on this poem on Matt's place...just thought I pass you the vote...well...it's great...

  • 18 years ago

    by OverlookedTruth

    Aww, this is too cute...

    but deep at the same time..sweet and true.

    well written, both of you. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Stormy

    Its sooo pretty... u got talent...(nd ur cuz)