Comments : You broke me.

  • 18 years ago

    by Bianca

    I think its cool
    I don't understand why we take them back, but you learn from your mistakes RIGHT

    The last two lines need improving all in all KEEP IT UP
    B

  • 18 years ago

    by _-*Broken*-_

    Good poem..Excellent...Keep it up..

    wishes u the best

    XxX
    Tess