Nice and sweet (my first poem)

by Switchblade89   Nov 27, 2005


Your a girl nice and sweet,
although friends we didn\'t meet,
I see now the truth it isn\'t pretty,
how I could be decieved, by this kitty,

I should have known from the start,
it should have been clear from the calls after Walmart,
I called you every now and then on your phone,
if you had the decency to answer, you would have known,

I remember the first day we met, it was like yesturday,
now it\'s stuck in my head, I see it everyday,
you and her standing on the balcony,
the yelling and whistling was too much excitment for me,

You Victoria have the most beautiful smile,
I wish I could see it again even for a little while,

but seeing that is gone,
like a necklace at a first cash pawn,
I\'m going to give up calling you,
it\'s the only thing left to do,

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  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    O0oh...ur first poem...is she your first love 2...well...it's good...considering it's ur first poem...Great

  • 18 years ago

    by RadianceInReverse

    WOW..thats...WOW..great for a first poem....I LOVED IT..especillay the kitty line..lol....love Joclyn

  • 18 years ago

    by just a poet

    This was your first poem? omg, u really have a talent and i think this poem is really good, and i hope your happeir now than u were then? take care
    elnazxx

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Ok im commenting!
    Don't delete this it really shows people how much you have evolved into a great writer!
    Some of this did seem forced but all in all its still better than some stuff I have read!
    You could fix this if you just sat down and look at it, and think how you feel bout it.
    Want help :D lol..
    Well leave it here, just say on it that its your first poem, and ask people to see if you've improved which you have alot!!
    Well done! xx

  • 18 years ago

    by I love anka - rooney !!

    Nice work nice work!

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