by N J Thornton Nov 27, 2005
category :
Life, society /
about society
I choose not to comprehend those who guard their house |
by PS
Hey i like this. i esp love the part about the fence. just the way you describe it is great. no one ever thinks about a fence as gaurding something because fences are so common. |
by Syn
Well, i like this piece alot.. even though its a little... confusing.. but its okay.. its still good. so, i cant really critic this one. sorry. |
by Minkus
I really liked this poem; the ending line pulled it together nicely. The first stanza was something special as well. 5/5, I thought. |
by Krysten
I really like this poem it, 5/5 i usually dont like poems that don't rhyme but i really did likee this one |
by Little Dot
Amazing job. Very good message and it was beautifully written. |