White Picket Fences

by N J Thornton   Nov 27, 2005


I choose not to comprehend those who guard their house
with a white picket fence,
even though it is chipped around the edges
to reveal the sodden timber.
Mother nature and the elementals
will always expose what needs to be,
so why this hassle to hide away from the world if
life is imminent?

Just like the photo of a loved one
embraced in a frame, keeps emotions contained within.
A small structure, less than a pinpoint to the earth,
cannot maintain perfection.
Difference and change will take its toil,
while black and white dreams of a faded photograph
make an unwary appearance.

The clothes introduced by our ancestors
only encourage this isolation of the truth,
and what is concrete.
Still,
if one fence was dismantled and one photo left loose,
the surplus truth would still never see
naked as beauty in society, nor emotions as success.
And the reason shall be left unsaid.

Whereas I,
I have been burned, and I loved again,
I lost, I found, I cried and I laughed,
removing my frames and doors that have shielded me from feeling,
and from living new experiences.
I danced in the rain and told the heavens about my day,
and I stood alone. I'm encircled now,
but there is still one space remaining...

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  • 18 years ago

    by PS

    Hey i like this. i esp love the part about the fence. just the way you describe it is great. no one ever thinks about a fence as gaurding something because fences are so common.

    Mother nature and the elementals
    will always expose what needs to be,

    i love that. nice job.

    btw thanks for you comment

  • 18 years ago

    by Syn

    Well, i like this piece alot.. even though its a little... confusing.. but its okay.. its still good. so, i cant really critic this one. sorry.

    ~david

  • 18 years ago

    by Minkus

    I really liked this poem; the ending line pulled it together nicely. The first stanza was something special as well. 5/5, I thought.

  • 18 years ago

    by Krysten

    I really like this poem it, 5/5 i usually dont like poems that don't rhyme but i really did likee this one

  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    Amazing job. Very good message and it was beautifully written.

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