Nice poem, i have often questioned about white picket fences.. they never were understood in my point of view.

Omg this poem is magnificent a work of genoius keep up thw writing i loved this great use of words 5/5

This is a great poem!! I love it. I gave you a 5. You deserve it.

Tiffany.xox.

5/5 geat in depth poem i love it. never thought of it that way,keep writing

The honesty within this is amazing! You convey each thought so well, truly a magnificent piece! Keep it up~Holly

Wow awesome poem i love it you have a way with words

This is extremely well written, and I love that it has so much to consider. My favorite lines: "the surplus truth would still never see
naked as beauty in society, nor emotions as success." I think you've hit the nail on the head right there... many times society requires that we hide away our feelings, that we become beings devoid of emotion. This really affected me personally because I've been taking those societal views too much to heart lately. Anyway, I very much enjoyed your beautifully stated and accurate observations, keep it up!

Thank you for sharing this piece. It actually gets the reader to think about the words and the meaning behind them (which is often rare to find on this site).

Keep writing
Nici

Amazing job. Very good message and it was beautifully written.

I really like this poem it, 5/5 i usually dont like poems that don't rhyme but i really did likee this one

I really liked this poem; the ending line pulled it together nicely. The first stanza was something special as well. 5/5, I thought.

Well, i like this piece alot.. even though its a little... confusing.. but its okay.. its still good. so, i cant really critic this one. sorry.

~david

Hey i like this. i esp love the part about the fence. just the way you describe it is great. no one ever thinks about a fence as gaurding something because fences are so common.

Mother nature and the elementals
will always expose what needs to be,

i love that. nice job.

btw thanks for you comment