The Next Day...

by LOVE.ME.HATE.ME   Nov 27, 2005


One day you said Hi,
That day I wanted to fly.
The next you said I love you to see my reaction,
That day, you were my only distraction.
It was your birthday, I sent you an e-card.
I hope you know I worked hard...

The next day I sent you a e-card of love,
With hearts and a dove.
You said you loved me, too.
Then you stuttered, 'Can you be my girlfriend?'
I wanted to say yes, but my heart needed time to mend.

Everyday I talk to you,
You say 'I love you more!',
I say it too, wondering what you love me for...
I introduced you to a friend the next day,
I knew you started to fall for her,
I always knew how happy you two were.

Every time you log in,
I know you two talk.
And you leave me on this lonely walk.
I wanted to be with you forever,
My love to you would be my only endeavor.

Now it's too late,
I cant change my fate.
I cant say I love you again,
I cant forget our time together way back when.
Thats all I have now since "The Next Day"...

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Hey guys, this is a scrap poem. I thought I was kinda slacking so I just wrote it. If you have any thing to help it, please comment. I'll edit it according to what you say. Thanks.

-Jin

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  • 18 years ago

    by James

    Interesting poem :) 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Solace

    I like it I really do. Deserves nothing but a 5/5 for sure. Keep writing and take care *always xx:

    *> : PainOfOne

  • 18 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    Very interesting poem.Great emotion too.