Tear Sealed Good-bye

by Princess09   Nov 27, 2005


I want you to be happy,
I really do.
I just can't help but wish,
That your happiness included me too.

I love you so much,
That it hurts inside.
This pain is real,
And won't be denied.

Smile for me,
So that I know,
You are happy,
And i can go.

She will never,
Love you as much as I.
No one ever will,
And this is why;

I love you more then me,
More then my life.
I'd do anything for you,
Kill with a knife.

That's why i must,
Say good-bye.
Because hearing about you two,
Will make me cry.

I want to be your friend,
I really do.
But it would kill me,
To listen to you;

Talk about her
And how she is your world.
WHen deep down,
I think I should be your girl.

To you my love,
This is good-bye.
Sealed with the very,
Tears that I cry!

11/24/05

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    Nice. I like the image of a letter sealed with tears - it just skips under the surface, but not too far so as to lose it's meaning. Incredibly nice work.

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 18 years ago

    by Jen

    The root of this poem must go deeper then i can ever imagine.... great write... it was a beautiful poem... what made it beautiful was that i could feel strong emotions the whole way thru 5/5 -Jen-

  • 18 years ago

    by martha shaw

    That's really sad, you even could read the mood of the poem 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    Outstanding work, I know exactly what you feel. This poem is taken straight to my heart.

  • I have to say that i dedicate this to my "boyfriend"...thats soon to be ex boyfriend...i feel the same exact way right now...keep it up...ur in my favz list