by sarah
Your write was beautiful. |
by greenmunky
I know its me .. i do have more than one best friend and you were one of them .. but for a while i havent felt that connection between us and she lives next door to me! you have to understand that i get confused easily. and im really stupid .. i didnt realize what i was doing .. but lately ive been missing you a lot .. i feel like theres an empty space inside me .. and im really sorry if i hurt you in any way and if you can accept this .. i am truly deeply sorry for everything i have done. i will understand if you dont wanna forgive me but i just want you to know that the apolagy is there .. |
by Richard
Awee sad but with a great meaning i loved it 5/5 |
by Samantha
Awe this poem was amazing... but dont cry over a guy... if he found someone he believesis better than you then you can do like 50 times better than him... nice write... |
Right now I can relly relate to this me and my boyfriend broke up about 5 days ago and I broke up with him because he wasn't happy when we were going out and I knew he would be better off w/ his ex ......it hurt but I knew for him it would be best |
WOW! I really love this poem! Soooo much emotion. So fantastic. 5/5 forsure!! |
This is sad but beautiful! i think nearly everyone has a special person that they will never totally get over and move on from...even tho they think they have! i feel exactly the same! its horrible!...the way u expressed ur feelings is fantastic |
I have to say that i dedicate this to my "boyfriend"...thats soon to be ex boyfriend...i feel the same exact way right now...keep it up...ur in my favz list |
by Little Dot
Outstanding work, I know exactly what you feel. This poem is taken straight to my heart. |
by martha shaw
That's really sad, you even could read the mood of the poem 5/5 |
by Jen
The root of this poem must go deeper then i can ever imagine.... great write... it was a beautiful poem... what made it beautiful was that i could feel strong emotions the whole way thru 5/5 -Jen- |
by Sole
Nice. I like the image of a letter sealed with tears - it just skips under the surface, but not too far so as to lose it's meaning. Incredibly nice work. |