Wow, thats powerful, really good! 5/5 keep up the good work!

Someone Special

I know exactly how you feel, very good, stay strong-xxx-

Hey girl, we all do that after being hurt so many times...this poem is great and i hope you can learn to trust and to love agian, it takes awhile....it really does...i'm not there yet and its been 6 months since i've been realy hurt...you'll get there, hang on . hugs-hayley

Wow great poem i really seriously love this one..

It's Beautiful hun x

Aww.. another sad poem.. it was touching.. many people feel youre pain.. maybe not as bad or worse.. but know that you're not alone!! ^_^

This was really good and I loved it...

Very Good poem...I love it. I love the flow of it. You really did great on it. Keep up thegood work, and maybe you can check some of my poems out, Imma go read some more of yours....

::MELI::

I feel ya, I know exactly what you mean. after being hurt so many times, its like not trusting anyone is your only hope. Hang in there and youll find someone who you know you can really trust

Really cute, its true for me.

I loved this poem. it reminds me of myself good job

That is an awesome poem..i can really relate to what you say.
We're always going to be hurt in life, once we realise that..it's so much easier to let people in.. One day we'll find those people that we treasure for a lifetime..
Hugs x
x x x

"Don't let the mistakes of others
Bring you so much doubt
That you push everybody else away
And shut the whole world out"

I just loved that part! Awsome poem! ~valerie

Your poems are so gud!!! there brilliantly written and they have so much feeling in them...i wish i could write as well!!! lol i can relate to them as well!!! lots of luv DarkCookie xoxo

I think your poems are brilliant. i can see very clearly how talented you are keep writing.

Yet again 5/5 i understand exactly how you feel.. afraid to love afraid to trust.. afraid to lose everything all over again..

I realate to every word, that i just read in this poem..you basically wrote everything on my view of trust and whats on y mind..thank you

-angel-

Wow.
This reminds me of me.
I can't stop repeating wow.
This is an amazing poem.
i can't help but be awed.
Will you do me a favor?
Will you comment/vote on some of mine
I want to know what the
Person who wrote this poem thinks
About mine.

Wow...you just managed to put into words what I've been trying to say for a long time now. Haha, now I have to go back and rethink some things I just said to someone...but yes. Awesome poem, keep up the good work!

A very sad poem, i enjoyed it, i always believed that sad poems were the best and you reminded me that.

Best Wishes
Wallace