Oh wow! that is so good! please keep on writing! i loved this poem! 5/5 ;)

Wow!! Amazing poem hun!! I love the way you wrote this, because it shows that even if things get horrible that eventually you can find someone new and get back on track with your life... fantastic poem!! 5/5 You are definitely one of my favorites!

Girla this was great, awesome, DEE BOMB!!! lol I really love it ma. And I hope this is true. That you are finally happy. Girl this poem has heart. I dont even know what to say. You had me SMILING like crazy. I was like " Go Ahead Girl" you tight. Great comeback.....is Miguel ALL yours now? And I got your pics, did you get mine? Do you have pics of Miguel? Or was that Miguel? Girl I dont know....lol, and about my last poem, that was an old poem, I was just blowing off some steam back then. Long story cut short: My cousin wanted Rolando and started talkin shit and I talked shit right back and she didnt expect it....CAT FIGHT!!!!! lol Girl I loved it, keep it coming ... I check everyday if you wrote anything and I am really happy you finally did cus I was starving for your poetry...lol bye chula

::MELI::

Wow! I've never read any of your stuff before but that was awesome! You are so talented. I'll have to read more. Keep writing! I'll be looking

Bello simplemente bello! me encanto deveras! im glad u liked my poem "If i gave You" n just as i told senorita RICAN C. i love to read ur comments u leave on my poems they mean alot to know what is on ppls mind but especially a few ppls minds like urs.... Keep it up mami and as i already told u congrats on finding true love again and i truly do it works for good cuidate... i si encuentrs un chico bueno echamelo pa'ca (donde mi) lol ciudate muah =) 5/5

Wow now this poem is intense, there is just sooo much intense emotion, its like a slap in the face lol , its shocking

lots of love
*~*Becky*~*