Comments : It hurts

  • 18 years ago

    by Nikki McKay

    I liked this poem... =)
    you write very good....keep it up
    /peace Nikki

  • 18 years ago

    by WakingFreedom

    Keep Up The Good Work!!
    hope to see some more

  • 18 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    Hey! it's your babe.I like that i am sorry. were that sad. but now you have me so be happy!!!
    love ya,
    Heather

  • 18 years ago

    by EllenoreShade

    That is pretty good keep up the good work....

    -Dol

  • It was good

  • 18 years ago

    by Hey Brittknee

    Omg that is soo good how you used that style, you definetly are a good writer~love always britt

  • 18 years ago

    by R

    I like it because I can sorta relate w/ what it is saying...great poem....

  • 18 years ago

    by ~mAybEsUmdAy~

    Great poem 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    OMG! i ttly love love love this poem. Simple, easy to write, but soooo meaningful. Incredible write.
    5/5/5/5/5!

  • 17 years ago

    by Roxy

    =O WTF People are just saying tis good -.- silly people -slaps them with a..Um DUMPLING =P-
    Man reading this poem makes me think of break ups They'er so sad and some are very hard to get over. In this poem Im sure you spoke for many people xxxx Roxy