Your Body-My Winter Wonderland

by myshiningstar14   Nov 27, 2005


Your body is like the snow, if I bury myself in it I get nice and
warm. Your eyes, like the
Christmas lights that hang on the houses; they light me up inside , all season long. Your flesh like the aroma of scented candles, all over me. You body is my winter wonderland.

When you lick me all over, it's like the snowflakes that have settled on my now cold peach skin. The way our bodies move together, flow together is like Jesus
like Christmas. And the way your fingers intertwine with mine, like the way the garland and the Christmas lights combine; still your body is my winter wonderland.

**please comment** xxLISSA

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  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    LOOOOVING YOUR DETAIL..
    Wow AMAZING...AMAZING
    5/5 thts all i can say
    ~The Poet~

  • 18 years ago

    by hewholovesherthemost

    Damn girl this is prolly the sweetest poem i've ever read, great job

  • 18 years ago

    by angie A

    I enjoyed this poem a lot!
    you wrote it with wonderful expression!
    fantastic poem 5/5 keep up the wonderful job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Cuddles

    Do you always write so descriptive? I gotta hand it to you. It's good. I'm beginning to think you write better than I do. Keep up the good work!!
    xxxxx Mary

  • 18 years ago

    by cLumsy

    Ahaha, oh how cute!

    And the way your fingers intertwine with mine, like the way the garland and the Christmas lights combine

    I love that part! keep on writing! 5/5 ;)

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