Wow...i love this...and i feel the same way a lot of the times...keep up the wonderful job and i can guarantee u that u will find ur soulmate...when u least expect it...5/5...and i would like to thank u 4 ur comment on my poem....i appreciate it...keep the poems comin... |
by TinyDancer46
I love this poem... it's very creative and beautiful. Keep up the amazing work, hun! 5/5 |
Faeries can give you butterflies. |
A good piece of writing. i liked the message you was putting across. my favorite stanza by far was 'They flutter by like two stars winking |
by dora
What a beautiful piece. very well written. great j0b 0n this 0ne. t0uching lines. heartfelt p0em!! well d0ne! keep it up! |
by Ali
Nice poem very beautiful |
by Cheyanne
Awww thiz poemz so beautiful!!!! i lyke ur use of wordz n thiz iz a unique poem i havent heard nethin lyke it keep up tha gud work ur doin gr8!!!5/5 |
by Jennie
It's such a good description...I can almost see the butterflies myself.......what a beautiful image. |
Damn that was amazing!!! I loved it so much! Your imagery and whole structure of the poem was just great. |
by Firooz
We love it........ |
by Pedro
Good |
Nice one but actually i will prefer that you would made the ending abit better.. anyway good job.. |