The Words

by Hurtingsoul   Nov 27, 2005


The fire
The pain
Desire
Being Restrained

The sorrow
The tears
Tomorrow
Bringing fears

The darkness
The hurting
Harness
Only lurking

The lies
The hate
Cries
No fate

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The fire burns
The pain mourns
Desire is lust
Being restrained I must

The sorrow is sadness
The tears behind madness
Tomorrow I'm afraid
Bringing tears to my aid

The darkness I fear
The hurting sheds a tear
Harness I gain
Only lurking in vain

The lies they say
The hate from fray
Cries are heard
No fate is learned

I have no idea where came from but something inside told me to
write it..
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  • 16 years ago

    by ghosts in bloom

    Wow, this is awesome! Unique to read, and therefore refreshing. (: The fast pace really made this poem all the more powerful, and I love how you had both versions, as both can hold different meanings when delved into. Truly a great job. This was the strongest to me, and my favorite part:

    "The lies they say
    The hate from fray
    Cries are heard
    No fate is learned"

    Well done,
    `Nova

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSuicidalxx

    Very deep and unique...a very interesting read....like it alot!!!!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Blissful

    This was different and interesting to read. I loved the pace, it was exciting. Well done *5/5*

  • 17 years ago

    by Fallen Angel

    Asome

  • 18 years ago

    by ~TornBecauseOfYou~

    Your Very Good at that Rhyme..Amazing Job
    but please comment my other account....i have no use for this account on poetry
    Just go to search poem...and type in
    Torn Pieces of my Heart
    and go to the accout of when i have a 2 golds and 2 silvers
    Thank you so much and
    Awesome Job
    5/5
    ~TPOMH~

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