Interesting:) I like it, keep it up the random stuffs always someof the best=)
thankyou for the comment it meant alot to me=)

look forward to hearing more from you
Pure

I loved it, I think those are the best poems where you don't know why you wrote it. It just happens. Take care xx:

*> : PainOfOne

This Is Such A BreathTaking Poem! Itz Astonishingly Written! I Luved It!
5/5
Luv,
*LuvYou2Death*

Wow... I am speechless! Hun, this poem is incredible. I've never read one in this style before, but it gave me chills because it captures the emotions so well. You're incredibly talented, I hope you start writing again soon!

Your Very Good at that Rhyme..Amazing Job
but please comment my other account....i have no use for this account on poetry
Just go to search poem...and type in
Torn Pieces of my Heart
and go to the accout of when i have a 2 golds and 2 silvers
Thank you so much and
Awesome Job
5/5
~TPOMH~

Asome

This was different and interesting to read. I loved the pace, it was exciting. Well done *5/5*

Very deep and unique...a very interesting read....like it alot!!!!!!!

Wow, this is awesome! Unique to read, and therefore refreshing. (: The fast pace really made this poem all the more powerful, and I love how you had both versions, as both can hold different meanings when delved into. Truly a great job. This was the strongest to me, and my favorite part:

"The lies they say
The hate from fray
Cries are heard
No fate is learned"

Well done,
`Nova