Dig, buried, gone.

by Sean   Nov 27, 2005


I grew a hole, way back when, dug hard
Solid into the ground, and the pain,
The screaming of the wounds, as I impaled myself,
With that shovel,
And buried a body, the girl I destroyed,
And people say, words have no impact?

So, the bleeding from a shovel, into the chest,
Into the heart, and the soul, was nothing,
And the etches, and the scratches, on skin,
Still nothing, while I try to fill that hole, as she rots,
And I try, to make it up to the world,
Oh yes, I try.

Kind, caring, thoughtful?
Figments of my attempt to bring to you,
Bring to the world, the girl who is now gone,
The girl, who made me happy.

Now, funny to think,
That fake attempt to be good willed,
Brought me the very real love I now hold.

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  • 18 years ago

    by christina marie

    OMG!!! wow, this was just--wow--i knew i loved your work for a reason! you're an awesome poet!! **5/5**

  • 18 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Opps.. site* Hehe.

    -Jennifer.

  • 18 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Hm.. I liked it very much. Although Heather M Craig thought you have a twisted mind, I differ from her opinion. Its not so much that you are a twisted kid, its that something in your life has made you want to write in such a manner.. (not saying the poem was bad, because its definately not). I admire such detail in your poem, it is beyound any others that i have read at this sight. You have a way with your flow, that its unbearable to not read such a good poem. Keep it up.

    -Jennifer.

    Overall Rating: 4/5

    P.S. You might want to know why I only would rate you a 4, its because no poem can be perfect, but yours is close. :D

  • 18 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    We have similar writing... I enjoyed your work... You have a twisted mind which & an unique style -- Nice.

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