We have similar writing... I enjoyed your work... You have a twisted mind which & an unique style -- Nice.

Hm.. I liked it very much. Although Heather M Craig thought you have a twisted mind, I differ from her opinion. Its not so much that you are a twisted kid, its that something in your life has made you want to write in such a manner.. (not saying the poem was bad, because its definately not). I admire such detail in your poem, it is beyound any others that i have read at this sight. You have a way with your flow, that its unbearable to not read such a good poem. Keep it up.

-Jennifer.

Overall Rating: 4/5

P.S. You might want to know why I only would rate you a 4, its because no poem can be perfect, but yours is close. :D

Opps.. site* Hehe.

-Jennifer.

OMG!!! wow, this was just--wow--i knew i loved your work for a reason! you're an awesome poet!! **5/5**