True Cinderella Story

by Jesslyn   Nov 27, 2005


*this is sad at first but i promise it ends good!

She sat upstairs,
With her door locked.
Thinking no one cared,
With a razor instead of a gun cocked.

She'd slit her wrist,
And watch her blood so red.
She just wished
She could forget the tears she shed.

She dreamed of more.
They asked her to come out.
When she did, they chose to ignore
What was that about?

Her friends,
They would cry
Like there was no end.
Asking her why she wanted to die.

She never could answer
What they wanted to know.
She wanted to be a dancer,
But her dreams were always told no.

She didn't need anyone,
Just her razor blade.
She was done.
This was were her dreams were made.

Each and every dawn,
She'd away.
As time went on,
Her life, she didn't want to take.

She stopped,
Went back to her old life.
Until one night she popped.
It took her mind off the knife.

She never quit.
She lied to her friends every day.
This life seemed to fit,
Until God sent him her way.

She never knew until his cousin
Said what Shawn was really feeling.
Her thoughts were more than a dozen.
It sent her mind reeling.

They started hanging out.
He truly made her smile.
So happy she wanted to shout,
& didn't think of dying for a while.

One night she did & told him how she felt.
He sounded hurt.
She listened & felt her heart melt,
As her tears of joy fell onto her shirt

He did care
& when he told her he loved her,
She decided to stay with him no matter where.
Now all of the past is a blur.

He gave her a gift
Before her 2nd self-slaughter was to begin.
He gave her the gift,
Of life again.

She lives life happy.
No more worry.
Nothing better could be.
This is a true Cinderella story.

*this is my story-all true-Shawn truly saved my life and he continues to today-i love him-i always will- plz vote/comment

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  • 18 years ago

    by melissa

    Wow thats alsome im glad you found and get to keep that person for you i want to know if you'll help me?i'm in love with this guy who means the world to me i cant seem to find the worlds to say to show how much he truly means!!we got together but i took him for granted now were apart and i cant bare it no more we broke up cause of the age hes older then me by alot but we care4 one another to death hes just the type to of guy who dosent know how to ope up and im shy i've tried wtirin a poem 4 him i just end up gettin stumbed and end up cryin before i get to end i want him to know that i would give my world up 4 him and no matter what anyone says age is only a number but its also the only thing in are way...so what do i do???i just love how you write and i like all your poems the truly come from the heart.i just dot want to do something i'll regret but if it chatches his eye and makes him see me again then thats what i'll have too do!!will you help???

  • 18 years ago

    by Jesslyn

    Awesome poem... hold on to shawn and dont ever let him go... he sounds like he's really good to you... I have someone like that too...:) good job.. keep it up!

    ~Jess~

  • 18 years ago

    by Kayli

    Hey jess i remember that night...! this poem is awesome.. keep it up girly... u know ur dream will come true. I love you girly.. xoxoxo Love always kay

  • 18 years ago

    by Liz

    Amazing poem you completely deserve him and im glad you found eachother! 5/5 for sure!

  • 18 years ago

    by Jesslyn

    Chicadee who was really the one that helped u stop cutting?????????