I love the last stanza. Very nicely written. 5/5 none to less. Keep writing and take care (always))xx:

*> : PainOfOne

Hey, your poem is so nice. When reading it, I saw it all in my imagination. very nice written.

YAY!! 5/5
This is EXCITING. I love it.
5/5!!!!!!!!

Great poem, its deep and well written

5/5

Omg! i love this poem!!

that was really deep..