Hey!!! Very nice poem...it had a lot of emotion and thats one of the main things i think makes poetry..Keep it up!!!
~Jessica

Awe... truely amazing... it definetly deserves a 5/5 very nice...

sammie

Wow this is really so good!! ur an amazing writter.. keep writting!!

What an excellent poem, almost made me cry 5/5

Great poem, well written all full of emotion