The rhyme and the flow of this poem is amazing
i loved it
everything seemed to be in the perfect place, every word seemed to fit

Wow...this is such a beautiful poem! Your a really great writer keep it up and stay strong. I've felt the same way too. If you get a chance could you comment on some of mine? Thank you!!! Good job!

Great poem hun! wow..
i know how you feel it sucks..
chin up and im always here if u need to talk..
xooxoxo

Damn this is exactly how i feel rite now. keep up this great work of urs.

OMG! It's like this poem was my own voice speaking for me, because I just went through something like that, and now I am holding my broken heart while he has another girl. Yeah, joyous life. This was a great poem and it meant so much to me that it's not even funny. Thanks SO much for posting! 5/5!

-Mikochan

I can sorta relate

Wow. I can relate exactly. I like how it moved about, PERFECT rythym.
5/5.

Awwww thats amazing 5/5 from me

Hey this was an excellent poem. but you need to stay strong cuz with enough time, things will get better..and you will forget him. it just takes time, but how much time depends on the person. just keep your head up. 5/5

This poem is excellent..i know how you feel i went throught his with one of my friends..but i loved him and he broke my heart..but im not to bad now..well i really liked your poem..keep up the great work :)

xoxo ::Empty Inisde::

This poems is one of those great one that i haop will stay with me forever.

Wow thanx this poem really helped me my gal and just broke up and im still head over hills for u well anyway i gave u a 5/5 because i can relate

Wow. This is really good.
Well written.
I'm adding you to my favorites.

Omg ur poems are soo good and so relatable!!! if u ever need to talk... im here :) keep writing ur fantastic at it
luv always smiling oxoxo

Very deep poem, I love it!

One poem I can actually say I can fully relate to.

Wow this is one of my favorites from what read so far!