Now that was beautiful. I love how it came straight from the heart. The structure was different, which I enjoyed. Good job.

Awww wow this is wonderful. you did such a great job writing it. beautiful and sweet. keep it up 5/5

~Kristina

That's a really sweet poem!! it's so touching! it's great that you have such a good relationship with your mom, and even greater that you wrote a beautiful poem about it! 5/5 ... and welcome to my favorites!!