by ~*×FaÃ3D‡‡M€mØ®Ãê§×*~ Nov 27, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Blade, gun, knife, rope |
by Bridgette
I really like this poem for some reason.. The flow was very good and the repetition of "suicidal thoughts" worked very well in this. It gave a nice effect. This was a very creative poem and I really like the way that you did it.. Great job on this! 5/5 |