Great poem
ur poems r so much better than mine
keep it up, take care
Erin

Great poem
keep up the good work

Wow.... here again...keep up the greay work

I meant to say great!!!

Theres alot of emotion within these words...you've come so far...from love poems so great sadness! well done

"FOR THE ANGEL OF DEATH SPREAD HIS WINGS ON THE BLAST, AND BREATHED IN THE FACE OF THE FOE AS HE PASSED, FOR THE ANGEL OF DEATH SPREAD HIS WINGS ON THE BLAST, AND BREATHED IN THE FACE OF THE FOE AS HE PASSED." I WILL BE THAT BREATHE.

i likeded dat line....its awsome......cant wait to read more!!