Absolutly marvolous!! I can relate so unbeleiveably well.

Good poem, n thx for ratin' mine! keep up the good work

When you hit me i should feel,
but ive lost all feeling.
^^ I loved those lines. Those just really stood out to me for some reason. The poem was a very good write and you definitely portrayed all of your emotions very well in this. Amazing write! 5/5 Keep it up!