Affraid to fall asleep

by ~*×FaÐ3D‡‡M€mØ®Ïê§×*~   Nov 27, 2005


She sits at home,
scared at night,
afraid to fall asleep,
without the light,

afraid of what will come,
when she starts to dream,
terrified in the lonely corner,
no-one able to hear her scream,

petrified that no-one will remember,
her lonely forgotten face,
most of the time invisible,
she new she was out of place,

being teased all her life,
for not being tall, blonde or thin,
for wearing darker clothes,
and all the troubles to fit in,

at night you hear her cries,
filled with sorrow and filled with pain,
shes sick of the ignorance, the troubles and blame!!!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Dacey Flame

    I like your writing =). I feel like I can relate. I love when I can relate =D. I know you prolly hear it all the time but people really do hurt others to help themselves. Just hold your head high and remember, nobodys gonna hate you for looking to them for support. Anyways, your an awesome writer, but try spell check. It really makes your poems sound better and it makes them easier to read.
    ~Kristina

  • 18 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Aww hunny. I'm so sorry if this is actually true. =( It's horrible to be rejected and yelled at and name called. And it's hard to handle it. If you ever need anyone to talk to, don't be afraid to PM me. =)

    The poem was great. I liked the flow and the rhythm. The rhymes were a little cliche, here and there, but otherwise it was ok. Keep it up. =) 5/5 xoxo

    Samantha

  • 19 years ago

    by Jo

    ..that was sad! good, but sad, lol....i hope that person isn't u, n if it is, i hope ur aight n i'm sry u had to go thru all those thingz-i can totally relate tho, changing sckoolz as often as i did growing up.....5/5 tho, i luved it

  • 19 years ago

    by Stephy

    Very well written, good joB!-xxx-

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