by Amanda Nov 28, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Today I saw a young girl sat on her own, |
Great job. Its an excellant poem. I love the way you explained it so perfectly. |
Wow it was really sweet at the beguining and the twist was cool alot of poems on this site has a twist but you really get so much into the poem you dont think untill the end. it was really good! |
by lisa marie
Wow this was a really good poem. There was so much emotion in it and it had a really great twist. I really liked it. nice job. |
by Darien
Another sad poem. This one was my favourite. A lot of details, alot of emotion and I felt sad reading this. I enjoyed it, thanks for the read :) |
Oh my god.. while readin it i was holding my breath ... a girl in my class is like her.. then it ended up being u .. m reallly sorry .. thats so sad.. nd i know how it feels.. ur poemis amazing |