Wow, that was really heart felt, 5/5 |
So sad, but beautifully written. good job 5/5 |
by Lyn
Oh what a beautiful poem! A poignant poem. We can never truly know the burden someone else has to bear. May God bless you and your family. |
by Russell
Wow that was very well written. |
by Princess09
This is a very good poem. it is very sweet and you can tell you love him. Awsome!!! |
by Letty
Awwwwww......This is a beautiful, sad poem . It has me in tear's right now . I can barely see what I'm writting . Your a good sister to your brother I can tell through this poem . This deserve's a higher vote then a five . so i will make you one of my favorites also . |
This i s a great poem. i have a friend whos brother has this too, must be terriable to live with. |
by Vanessa Lea
Very moving poem... great work. I wish the best for you and your family and hope that a cure for Duchenne Muscular Dystrophy is found soon.... |
by Samantha
Wow, that was amazing and tragic. It's a sad thing to have to watch people suffer. |
by Lucy D1am0nd
Wow, this poem made me cry. Its so sad that these things happen but he sounds like a great little guy. I know whats its like to lose a brother. I send you my love. |
by Kristen
Good job! A very good and tear-jerking poem!=) Keep it up! |
by Megadrive
That is so sad:( I am so sry. I really love this poem, u did an amazing job. It has so much emtion. wonderful, wonderful job. |
by MJ.
Omg thats so sad..such a touching poem..u must love ur brother very much..thank u so much for commenting on my poem..take care |
by Brokeback
Aww, I'm sorry to hear that. |
Now this is something..touched by heart.. felt by emotions. |
by Kourtney
Your poem is amazing it touched me so much. You did an awesome job on this poem it shows how much u really care bout ur brother. |
by Jackie Marie
Excellent poem..I am soooo sorry to ehar about this though..I hope the best for you and your family* |
by Kristen
Great poem it touched my heart very much. it mademe cry thinking someone you are close to is going to die. Its not that easy but i will pray for Michael sammie may god bless you and your family!!! |
Wow im really sorry you should look up the book the scarlet Ibis Ive read it before and this poem reminded me of it very well written great job |
by Kylie
Wow! This is such a great poem..really sad but really good! I can't exactly say "I know how you feel" because i don't..but i do feel your pain because i've had similar things happen to me. |