Wow! This is such a great poem..really sad but really good! I can't exactly say "I know how you feel" because i don't..but i do feel your pain because i've had similar things happen to me.

Wow that is a truly beautiful poem. it touched me in a magical way. its so sweet and heartfelt, yet so tragic and sad. im sorry. keep writing its great, take care
polly

I am so sorry to hear about your brother.. i do not know what i would do if that was my brother.. but i would want him to know how i feel and how important he was to me no matter what happened.. your poem was really good. very sad but yet still good.. stay strong and i hope your brother gets better.. bye bye EJ

Thats a good poem seriosuly. im soo sorry about ur bro. i dont know what he has what it means but it sounds bad im really sorry.

This is a beautiful poem. You can see the pain and sorrow in it, and can feel it evoke a similar feeling in the reader. It is well written with a nice structure, and a nice flow. My heart goes out to you.

Yours Sincerely

Andrew Kirkman

I can really relate.. i feel it that way about my sisters.... very good poem.. 5/5

I've been reading a few of your poems tonight and this one along with A Dying Child really has me choked up. My heart goes out to you and your family. Take each day one at a time and enjoy the time you have. I'll be saying a prayer tonight. xox

Wow. What a poem! How sad, yet wonderful this poem is. Best wishes to your brother, you, and the rest of your family. God bless.

Very sad and touching poem 5/5