Oooo babes i loved it it so full of emotion!!! ur so good....:D i hearts it love ya ::broken.heart::

Awe... thats so good i can totally relate. perfect as usual!

Oh my gosh baby....thats so beautiful...but yet really sad. Im sorry I cant help you any but you know im always here for you no matter what okay? Dont be afraid to talk to me. Which that will never happen right? lol. I love you so much sissy!!!***kisses***

I really liked your line 'breathing just to bleed' it captures that whole apathetic feeling of 'why are we alive' really well in a short and simple line. Nice work.