I love the detail you go into with your feelings... that's really what I've been lacking lately.
"This smell takes me back
Strikes me
Strikes a match
That burns into a memory"
This part sounds like a lovely song, it's got a great rhythm to it.

"I cant help thinking what if
Maybe you cant either"
This kind of confused me... can't what? Oh wait I seriously just got it now. Nevermind... I think it's just punctuation that would make it clearer. Anyway... great job, must go read the rest of yours!

Much love
libby