Good poem, very strong ending, structerly weak though... I recomend breaking up stanzas, and breaking up your lines better too. I think this was well written, and it kept me reading all through.. Good job but work on structer.

Are you the Jinxy I knew? That I haven't heard from in what seems like months? I keep thinking of that Jinxy, but how am I suppose to know.

If you are I changed my name to avoid my brother finding my poems.

~Purple~