Not afraid to die

by Wintersolstice   Nov 28, 2005


I hate pretending im ok
I hate the repetition every day
I hate that dad reminds me im a screw up
I hate the way my life always has to suck
I hate the way im all alone
and I have no way to move on
I hate this sorrow, burning, fear
I hate the fact that im still here
I hate it that I care for you
I hate it that you look right through
I hate the way that even sunshines fake
I hate the way my lifes a big mistake
I hate it that this tear has left my eye...

...and that im not afraid to die.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Empty Space

    Again, I love how you express helplessness and how you hate being helped. It's really difficult to do that. And it's a skill quite few, myself included, lack. It's extraordinary the way you portrayed it here.

    Exellent!

  • 18 years ago

    by StormyWeather

    Your poem was good- there was a lot of powerful emotional sentiment in it. However, if you concentrated more on the poem, and less on forcing rhymes, i would like it so much more...

    sorry, probably not what you wanted to hear from a 13 year old, but i never lie.

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