Your poem was good- there was a lot of powerful emotional sentiment in it. However, if you concentrated more on the poem, and less on forcing rhymes, i would like it so much more...

sorry, probably not what you wanted to hear from a 13 year old, but i never lie.

Again, I love how you express helplessness and how you hate being helped. It's really difficult to do that. And it's a skill quite few, myself included, lack. It's extraordinary the way you portrayed it here.

Exellent!