Comments : Dove upon a grave...

  • 18 years ago

    by justeene

    I wrote this poem when i broke up with the one person i love.
    it is dedictaed to him,
    with all my love Sean
    forever

  • 18 years ago

    by Grotesque Angel

    Its great, I love love poems (mind the pun) keep it coming...

    Darkest Wishes
    Matt

  • 18 years ago

    by I love anka - rooney !!

    Nice, not bad work!

  • 18 years ago

    by Pilar

    Oh this note captivated me:

    "Dig my grave
    Dig it deep
    Marble stone
    From head to feet
    And on this grave
    Place a dove
    To show the world
    I died for love"

    Beautiful.

    5/5 for sure =)

    adios!

    ...pili...

  • 18 years ago

    by caressa

    I love it! your a great poet.... keep it up!

    -Ress-

  • 18 years ago

    by RedRose

    It is truly beautiful. dying in a love poem, meaning tht u love this person u wud die for them.
    it is beautiful and i love the last stanza