You've sold me on this one. Perfect. well done.

Wow!!! thats was very different then most of the poems on here. but it was great!!! I like *different* in ppl...lol
Keep your head up!!!
~Jessica~
*aka* Thug Baby

Great poem, quite original, very good

Wow...Vanessa...you are a great poet.. I can feel the emotion... Keep It Up!

XOXO
Kayla

That is very poetic. I haven't read something like that in a long time.
Awesome job :)

Awe it went from happy to sad so quick... nicley written... good job...

sammie

Greta job...very nicely put in good wording...loved it!!!! :)

I like it!!Really good poem...keep writeing..kiss =**

I absolutely love this poem.. Excellent job.. keep it up 5/5 .. oh and thanks for commenting and voting on mine..

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

There is no sadness in my eyes when you are looking at me...
..xx