Forever sleeping forever still

by forever-tourtured-by-crimson-pain   Nov 28, 2005


I sit alone and bleed
It's that release i need
Crimson regret, quickly pouring
Everyone ignoring
My hurting and pain
Feeling like they have forgot my name
I wish this nightmare would end
My wings to broken to mend
Wanting so much to fly away
Instead in a river of regret i do lay
So many broken dreams
My mind is bursting at the seams
Feeling so hurt and confused
So many times my knife is used
This is the end of the line
The wall of life i can not climb
I hate to cry
I want to die
Then ill find a better life
One without the knife
Tonight is when i will depart
As i push this knife into my heart
I feel numb and free
Is this really me?
I will always love you
This was something i had to do
I lost the want and the will
Forever sleeping forever still
Free at last
Tonight i say goodbye to the past
Good night and goodbye
I hope this explains why

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  • 17 years ago

    by AsilentDrip

    I know how you're feeling :/

    good poem 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Chris Engle

    Hey crimson! i loved the poem! you did a Very good job of displaying your emotions and how you feel, and i honestly cant think of much to say bad about this poem..

    only real comments i could say is you might do better trying not to force rhymes.. this particular one was done very well, but i believe that there is alot of potential in you that could come out if you didnt force rhyming.

    ~chris

  • 18 years ago

    by I.Lose.It.All

    Wow i really like it sad but good wow. u must be the best rightier ever.wow
    luvies
    ~jenny~
    ~the_dare_devil_herself~.

  • 18 years ago

    by Becca

    Hunny thts really very god n u put alot of emotion into it but plz dont do anything. dont say goodbye. id be so lost n unable to go on without u. u have helped me like no other can. u understand more than anyone else ever could. i know it hurts like hell sometimes well alot of the time but still...plz dont kill yourself. dont leave your loved ones behind. we can and will get through this. i promise. just hang in there.
    luv becca xx

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