Hunny thts really very god n u put alot of emotion into it but plz dont do anything. dont say goodbye. id be so lost n unable to go on without u. u have helped me like no other can. u understand more than anyone else ever could. i know it hurts like hell sometimes well alot of the time but still...plz dont kill yourself. dont leave your loved ones behind. we can and will get through this. i promise. just hang in there.
luv becca xx

Wow i really like it sad but good wow. u must be the best rightier ever.wow
luvies
~jenny~
~the_dare_devil_herself~.

Hey crimson! i loved the poem! you did a Very good job of displaying your emotions and how you feel, and i honestly cant think of much to say bad about this poem..

only real comments i could say is you might do better trying not to force rhymes.. this particular one was done very well, but i believe that there is alot of potential in you that could come out if you didnt force rhyming.

~chris

I know how you're feeling :/

good poem 5/5