by Truest Lies Nov 28, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
She was dressed all in gray, |
I love the imagery used in it along with good suspenses nice one...... |
by Dreams
Oh.. this gives me the goosebumps. What can I say? I think this is almost perfect. The first few stanzas were filled with so much sorrows and pain. Until the pair of arms came, it's like a dream, a modern fairytale but sadly it ended with just a dream. Very sad, yes, very indeed. |
by Samantha
That was a good poem...very sad and it kept me wondering what was gonna happen |
That was wonderful... you had a lot of twists in there... i loved it... you're talented, keep writing... |