That was wonderful... you had a lot of twists in there... i loved it... you're talented, keep writing...

love,
Ipsita

That was a good poem...very sad and it kept me wondering what was gonna happen

Oh.. this gives me the goosebumps. What can I say? I think this is almost perfect. The first few stanzas were filled with so much sorrows and pain. Until the pair of arms came, it's like a dream, a modern fairytale but sadly it ended with just a dream. Very sad, yes, very indeed.

I love the imagery used in it along with good suspenses nice one......