I think that this was very deep

Different. I'll give you that. I think that's what i like about your poems so much..they're just so different to anything ive read before. That's a great thing! Mine are just boring..lol. You're a very clever lad :) take care xox

This is a very original poem, I like the way you have expressed yourself here. I like the finality of it, and I love the last lines; I think they make an effective end to a wonderful poem.
Keep Writing
*VioletRaven*

This is interesting and quite unique, I like the way it is set out and your repetition is quite effective. The whole piece is very controlled and your emotions are portrayed well here/

AWSOME!!!! it's very deep. very good rythme. i love it;)