SAYING GOODBYE

by johnnys_princess   Nov 28, 2005


With my hand on yours i feel a tear run down my cheek,
For i know the time is coming your too weak.
I tried to be brave and i tried to be strong,
I knew the time was coming and knew it wouldn't be long.
I wish for a moment i could take your pain,
just to hear you laugh and see your smile again.
I placed a gentle kiss on your head,
as you lay lifeless in your bed.
I could see you fading fast the time is here,
So i whispered special words in your ear.
Goodbye little one i couldn't forget if i tried.
Your heart stop beating, but mine just died.

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  • 18 years ago

    by bluecrush

    Oh my god im crying that is good!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by lexie

    That was a beautiful poem.a very sad one tho.i think you did a wonderful job of telling the story.keep up the great work.-lexie

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    "your too weak" I think you mean "You're too weak"

    Anywho, I thought this was a good poem. And I really liked that last line. Powerfull!!

    Your flow and rhyming were pretty good, And although it wasn't that long, you got straight to the point. Really good job! Keep it up. 5/5

    `Taleee. xx.

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    So sad..every word touched a diff part of my heart..amazing.

    Lissa

  • 18 years ago

    by Mona

    Wow very sad poem. Beautiful writin. Breath taking. Well done. -xxx-

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