Wow very sad poem. Beautiful writin. Breath taking. Well done. -xxx-

So sad..every word touched a diff part of my heart..amazing.

Lissa

"your too weak" I think you mean "You're too weak"

Anywho, I thought this was a good poem. And I really liked that last line. Powerfull!!

Your flow and rhyming were pretty good, And although it wasn't that long, you got straight to the point. Really good job! Keep it up. 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

That was a beautiful poem.a very sad one tho.i think you did a wonderful job of telling the story.keep up the great work.-lexie

Oh my god im crying that is good!!!