Hope you like this.

You truly are an amazing writer. you have so much talent! i read your poem 'the horse' the other day, and went absolutely crazy, and i apologise for the rambling comment. but after reading 'the night i sleep', i realised just how fantastic your poetry is! i had to read the others then and this just stood out as brilliant.

Perplex violent rainbows with euphoric sensation
uncover inducements to mock men's creation
Harrowing shadows, cornering slightly
awkwardly subtle, grasping me tightly

you have a wonderful grasp on language, and have manipulated i to produce a stunning poem. Your use of an oxymoron adds interest and deepens the poem, and your vocabulary is wonderfully rich. i enjoyed this poem so much!!!

it also makes sense to me, in the wonderful way poetry is. a fantastic piece. you are now one of my 'favourites'. do keep writing as you have such talent.

~sa~

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