Brilliant. Loved it... Thats all i can say i loved it.... ur a great writer

Amazing. well written and heartfelt . nice job!

Wow I appreciated it even more with the explanation...it truly is clear your heart and soul went into writing this poem...
The railtracks being iced...reminded me of tripping up in life...falling over, so many wonderful powerful images
Great writing :)

Wow!! Very touching!! Great Job!! 5/5!!