Wow *shivers* Wow.... Sorry... I am speechless.. wow.....

This was so emotional. I am having tears in my eyes. I can see this little innocent girl in front of me, asking Mrs G for the ingredients, and never see her come back with it.

My god.. wow *shivers* wow. This is so powerfull. So emotional. Damn.

I havent read anything like this. This is unique, original, breath taking. This is more then just excellent.

Very good. It touched me, got me in tears, got the time standing still for me.. Damn..

Good work, keep it up. It was amazing. Really. Unbelievable good. Thanks for sharing this.

What an odd poem, very interesting indeed though. Reminds me of a nursey rhyme. But with a rather eerie twist to it...

*WoW*... That was really incredable!!
It felt just like a story. I like poems where you can picture the characters from them in your mind. I like the way you asked quetions in this poem. After all what is a poem with no mystery???
Keep your head up high!!!!! Very great work! Def-5/5
~Jesscia~
*aka* Thug Baby

O0oh...does that means she's dead...that's no good...lol...u r amazing..I love unspoken love 2...didn't leave a comment on it though...